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Review:daliha says:
Can I just keep saying your brilliant? Because you are!

I was just at your MTA thread as I was curious to see what others had asked you. I saw you had said that for a moment you were afraid to write the twins, well let me let you know you've nailed them. I love your portrayal of them.

Now onto to the review of the chapter, I love it like all others, even though you jump from time to time it's not confusing at all nor is it choppy. And I love how Angelina here acts like a normal fifteen year old girl with a crush, she isn't overly dramatic or anything of the sort (as some writers portray girls with crush.) I mean she has a life outside of it, also you and details! I thought that hand written note written by Hermione was a poster of the twins products (I thought she was yelling at them.) So the note was clever.

Author's Response: Hey!!

Baww. I'm totally blushing right now, but thank you for your compliment nonetheless. And !!! MTA thread. It tickles me pink when people actually use them and I've gotten so many lovely questions recently and ahh! It's been exciting. As I've written WAT, I've found that writing the twins isn't nearly as difficult as I feared, but it still astounds me when people enjoy my characterizaiton of them.

Thank you so much for all your kind words about this chapter!! Though I will point out that Angelina (and the rest of the cast in this chapter) are seventeen or eighteen years old. They're in their seventh year of school, but it's an easy mistake to make since Harry and the gang are fifth years and fifteen during the OotP era. And lol. Sneaky hermione slipping Fred and George an invite to the DA meeting after yelling at them. :P

Thank you so much for this review.


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