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Review:daretodream says:
Daphne has to trust Callum, because if she doesn't she'll never get the answers that she desperately wants and needs. If I was her, I would hate every single second of that.

I like that you have her accidental magic occuring so frequently, but she has next to no control over it. It is perfectly plausible that as children got older, their magic would occur more and more frequently as the emotions got the better of them.

Callum is another interesting character. Did he go to Hogwarts? Did he somehow just figure out that he has magical powers, and has spent the time honing how to control them? I'm not sure yet, but I want to know.

I see that in your pairings you wrote Sirius/OC? So does that mean that eventually Daphne does find out who she truly is? Does she go to Hogwarts? I'm very intrigued.

Good chapter!

~Cassie

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