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Review:daretodream says:

So the premise of your story is really, really unique. Were there people who could do magic who didn't get Hogwarts letters? The concept is both interesting and slightly horrifying at the same time. Imagine trying to live, not really knowing or understanding who, or what, you are.

Your main character also seems to be pretty well defined for a first chapter. It is understandable that she would want to stay away from people, especially considering how they have treated her so far.

One thing I would strongly suggest you fix is that you have a typo in your story summary. It's spelt their, not thier. It has happened to me before too, because story summaries usually don't have spell check, and I'm sure it's just a stupid typo. I'm not trying to be nitpicky, I just know a lot of people on this site are very particular about spelling and grammar issues, and that will seriously put them off. Fixing it could help you get more readers.

Overall, a cute and intriguing start!!


Author's Response: Thank you again. I know! The uniqueness of setting a marauder story outside of hogwarts was what intrigued me to start on this story but I couldn't make the pieces floating around fit in a way it made sense. I had a hard time finding time to write past few years too. I'm slowly coming back to it. I'll leave it be for now hopefully I can revive it at some point. Thank you so much for your beautiful words and thank you for nitpicking, because we all have room to grow and improve. Thanks and so so very very sorry it's taken me this long to reply!

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