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Review:daretodream says:
Hello!

So the premise of your story is really, really unique. Were there people who could do magic who didn't get Hogwarts letters? The concept is both interesting and slightly horrifying at the same time. Imagine trying to live, not really knowing or understanding who, or what, you are.

Your main character also seems to be pretty well defined for a first chapter. It is understandable that she would want to stay away from people, especially considering how they have treated her so far.

One thing I would strongly suggest you fix is that you have a typo in your story summary. It's spelt their, not thier. It has happened to me before too, because story summaries usually don't have spell check, and I'm sure it's just a stupid typo. I'm not trying to be nitpicky, I just know a lot of people on this site are very particular about spelling and grammar issues, and that will seriously put them off. Fixing it could help you get more readers.

Overall, a cute and intriguing start!!

~Cassie

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