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Review:heart_of_a_slytherin says:
Oh my goodness that was lovely! I think you portrayed Lily's thoughts and feelings beautifully and really brought out the stress and tension of the situation she was in. She was going against everything she knew for her love and her family of friends. You showed a brilliant piece in which Lily shines brightly in a heroic light. I think your grammar was really good. I couldn't find any mistakes which usually I do but this was amazing!!! It was a sweet and sad one-shot that went straight to a person's heart and touched it. The way she wants to protect her friends even though she can't really fight well is so courageous. I don't even know what I'd do in that situation! Keep writing your stories.
Love, Lyla

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

I'm glad you like my Lily. I wanted to give her a different perspective than usual, and this is what popped out!

And I try really hard to work on my grammar and make sure it is what it needs to be.

Thanks so much for the review!


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