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Review:megthechef43 says:
Dark,

I ache for Draco. It is horrible that this is happening to him. I love how you have taken this quote and made it uniquely your own in this lovely first chapter. I can feel Draco pain and angish in this chapter.

I love the swing and what it represents to him. I also love how he stated he would burn it down after the divorce was final because it was a reminder and it was completely hers. I love how he could stand anyone else ever sit in her swing/taking her place because he loves her so much.

It is so emotional to read about Hermione's gradual removal from his life because it is so hard. I think the most emotional moment is when Draco is laying in bed and want to touch her. It was beautifully written.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

Author's Response: Ah, Meg...

You found the story of mine that is the nearest and dearest to my own heart.

My Delilah story is important to me, but this story has a lot of the feelings that I felt myself, in my own personal life.

What he felt in laying beside her, wanting to touch her... oh, yes. That piece is so very real.

I'm so glad that you liked her swing. Yes, it meant so much to him that he would burn it before another woman sat down on it.

His love for her is so great that there would be nothing right about it... almost an abomination against his soul to allow such a thing.

When you love someone so strongly, those are the thoughts that cross you heart and mind. That kind of love will not faulter even when everything is falling apart...

Thank you so much for finding this story and Reviewing. This story truly means a lot to me and so do your words.

Dark Whisper

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