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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey! :) Aww this was great! I really loved the idea of 'the dragon of his heart' and the really touching and moving words that Frank/you wrote :P It was just so meaningful and so loving. It was also really sweet that Frank had so much pride and faith in Neville even if other people didn't, and how he knew Neville would be by Harry's side fighting. It was also interesting how much he knew and didn't know about the prophecy!

I also thought your characterisation of Neville was great! I'm a little hesitant about the line he said to Harry, especially: Hold on in there mate. We’ve got your back. The mate and the we've got your back doesn't sound quite like something he would say. Nevertheless, it was especially terrific at the end where Neville chooses to keep his father's wand and realises that he is Frank's son and not an underdog. The conversation with his grandmother was also great - I loved how few words they needed to convey that they were on Harry's side and believed him.

A really nicely written fic! Great use of the prompts - I especially loved how well you slipped in the dark detectors - and it made a lot of sense as well, that the Death Eaters might target them.

- Charlotte

Author's Response: Aw thanks Charlotte :D I don't know why I added that sentence. I guess at that moment I... I really don't know :D This was my very first fic with no romance and I think I'm liking this better. I'm writing something like this (Not similar, but it's not romance) hope that goes well as well.

Thank you for the lovely review :D You made my day.

*Hugs*

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