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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey there!

I'll come clean and just admit that at first I thought the character was Sirius, not Snape. I was not expecting Snape, in any way at all. It's a very nice surprise. Leather jacket, cigarettes and swearing -I can just so imagine Snape with those things.

I really like how you gave a lot more depth to Snape compared to most author. I dare say that you might have just changed the way I look at Snape. I never pictured him to be all this rough and gloomy, though I suppose there is a high probability that he acted something along the lines of what was in your story when he was a teenager.

I'm really creeped out by the way Snape acted. Wow. I mean, I never really thought about how far his thoughts for his desire goes. Even so though, you played with the story really well, you portrayed Snape so well. I realise that this one of those 'serious' stories and all, but I just can't help but be amused by the repetition of the F-word. I never took Snape to be the one to swear, but then again he is a Slytherin after all. I seriously need to check out more Snape stories, I am so shallow and biased when it comes to him. *sigh*

Anywho, I thought you really did a good job with Snape's character. I really enjoyed this story and I would love to read more of your stories. (I will. When I get time!)

Stay excellent,
Izzy xx

Author's Response: Hi! Sorry for the late response, I've been in exile.

I was sort of trying to make him a bit Siriusish, because in a lot of Marauder fics, Remus-as-author-mouthpiece points out that you know what, Sirius, you and Snape are not actually that different for two people who hate each other so much. I thought that idea was interesting/strange/funny, hence leather jacket and cigarette.


I s'pose my Snape's different because I've never read any fic centering upon him as a main character - or really wanted to tbh - but I'm well acquainted with infatuated, somewhat creepy teenage boys and so I wrote about them instead. So it's not giving depth, it's just incompetence. XD
No, but seriously though, thank you, that's a fantastic compliment and one which I wouldn't have thought I deserved.

The swearing was funny to me, too. As were the leather jacket and the cigarette. That's just an inherently amusing image.

Thank you so much for your review, it boosted my already overinflated ego tremendously.


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