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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Hey, it's me! Thanks so much for entering my challenge! :)

I really liked the start of this. It was funny, flowed really well and I can clearly see where the quote is coming in. I really liked the irony of the quote! I think it'd be really interesting if she says it to him at some point because then that could be where he got it from when he's talking to Harry :D ahah, I really shouldn't be getting ahead of myself, I'm sure you're going to write the story brilliantly (:

The way you characterized Lily, Sirius and Peter was really nice. It was pretty much exactly like how I always imagine them and then to throw a character like Mina (who I like a lot) in the story to challenge their personalities was a good idea because it fit really nicely :) I'm excited to read the next chapter and I'm really glad you got it in on time! ;D

-Amanda

Author's Response: I'm really trying to work on the characterization for this story. I wanted them to all appear very canon, so that comment means a lot!

And your first note may have given me a plunny for the ending. Maybe. I haven't decided yet. ;)

Thanks for reviewing!


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