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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Naida!! Whoo, so I've finally managed to review this chapter! I am an incredibly lazy person, so sorry about the massive intervals between reviews. I'M HEREE!

But anyway, this was such a great chapter! It seemed to flow much better than the previous few, though I'm not sure why. Lily and Hattie's friendship is really natural and relaistic, if that makes sense? It's not loads of hype and sarcasm and randomness like in so many humrous stories- it's really fresh, and so I really enjoyed reading the scenes iwth the two of them in.

The humour's definitely there- subtly, but surely! It's all building up plot-wise, and looking generally fabby.

This was a lovley chapter with a sparkly, polished feel to it. Can't wait for more!! ;D

xox
Annon

Author's Response: HI ANNON I LOVE YOU ♥

Ooh, flow is good :D I never really pay attention to my flow to be honest, so it's nice to know that I must have done something right :P I'm glad it's realistic. Most friendships aren't built on sarcasm and random comments, and I wanted to show that. You're so lovely for leaving me this *is very happy now* Thank you so much!

-Naida

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