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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:
Horray for plot progress.

I love that you brought Fluer and Bill together while looking through Mhairi's house. It was different seeing someting that wasn't along the linese of 'Bill and Fluer love at first sight'. Instead you're writing it so that Fluer is sort of headstrong about it. Its very in character of her.

I love the way you're writing her. I can see the triwizard champion in her in this chapter which is commonly overlooked in fanfiction. People like making her materialistic, and while she might have been to a level, she also had her name chosen out of the goblet. I see that half of her here, as well as the fashionable half. Its great

I also love your description. Everything time there is a ew character introduced, or a new scene you paint this really crisp image of it in my head. It is really lovely.

Also I like that you're inculdinng a lot of French. I can tell you're pretty educated in the language (maybe even fluent?). And while I don't understand a word of it, the use of it really adds to the verisimilitude of the novel (hows that for a large litterary word :p)

Anyway keep up the good work :)

-BW24

~House Cup 2012 (Go 'Claws!!!)

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