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Review:adluvshp says:
Aw this was a cute little story!

I really liked reading this. The butterflies part was just so sweet. The narrative flowed smoothly and I like the insight you gave into the daughter, father, and the mother. The ending was so heartbreaking, poor Arabella.

I liked your writing style. It is so straightforward and simple. There were a few grammar and spelling errors though, but you can easily re-read and fix them, or get a beta for you.

All in all, good work!

8/10

Cheers!
AD

Slytherin for the Cup 2012

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I know there are a few errors and I'm thinking about getting a beta to help me with that because it is not my strong suit. Again thank you!

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