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Review:The Last Marauder says:
You can't just end on a bomb-shell like that?! It's not fair! I hate such cliffhangers! Ah, not really, but you know what I mean!

I loved the Potterwatch bits in this chapter - the idea of the hairy watch really made me laugh - then the moment of Fred and George discovering that Remus is indeed Moony, it was like meeting a celebrity! That was really nice.

I also liked your broadcast on Harry breaking into the minstry. But one thing, wasn't George's first appearance on the show after Christmas, the one that Harry, Ron and Hermione listen to? It's just a little thing, and it doesn't really matter at all.

Now all that is in my head is Bellatrix and why she is visiting Andromeda and what she is going to do! I must know.

Anyway, thanks for the double update, it was great! Can't wait for more though, hope everything is going well with you !!! :-)

Author's Response: uh-oh, you might be right about the george thing. i'll have to look that up and see how i can rectify that. thanks for pointing it out now though.

glad you liked the hairy watch bit too. it's a terrible pun, but i had fun all the same, just as i had fun with fred and george learning that remus was a marauder. it just didn't seem right that they would never find out when he's sitting RIGHT there! i couldn't resist.

i will try to have the next chapter up soon, and again i can't wait for more of door into the dark! :D

i will also try to get up another chapter for Rampant Magic. ;)

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