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Review:Blue Flame says:
oooh I can't even tell you how excited I was to see just how many chapters I had to catch up on with this awesome story ! ^_^ This was a great chapter, and I love the relationships growing between Amy and her support group, especially Liane. I love that she's there as a character to sort of reflect back to Amy how she was at that age, and I can't wait to see how she does in the world of healing. The baby shower scene was so cute, I love the games you came up with!!

I also loved that little bit from Molly, as I sooo read it in her voice. After so many kids and grand-kids, she would definitely be able to tell when someone is going to pop. =P And I am definitely hoping Victoire will soon, can't wait to see those bound to be adorable twins!

And I did try for some sort of critique to give so my review wasn't just a giant squee, but nothing popped out at me! Grammar seems good, there's no mistakes jumping out and distracting me, the whole chapter flows together very nicely. ^^ I think this is one of my favorites in a while, actually. It feels like things are starting to pick up again, and that gets me totally excited for what might happen in future chapters. =D

Lovely chapter, I'm onto the next!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! Liane is quickly becoming one of my favorite characters, and if I ever do a sequel, she'll play a pretty big role. But as much as Amy's similar to Liane, she's also similar to Kate. The baby shower was fun to write, although I didn't come up with all the games myself. Google helped with that. ;)

I loved putting a bit of Molly into the story. She's such a fun character and I imagine her being such an awesome grandmother. The twins will come sooner rather than later!

I'm really glad you've been enjoying the story so much! Thanks so much for the lovely review! :)

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