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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Hi, back again!

I have to say it seems very fitting for Godric to be a warrior: it reflects the bravery and courage that Gryffindor is known for. The beginning of this really drew me in...you did a good job of describing the horrors of battle. There was one line that had me confused, though: "The five men that lived in our villiage who had asked me to have the knighted after I had been were dead." I assumed this meant that there were men who wanted to be knighted, but were killed before they got the chance. But I wasn't sure, so maybe a re-wording of that sentence would help.

It seemed to me that Godric didn't like the idea of taking so much life, and that really made him likeable for me. He's clearly more than just a bloodthirsty soldier, which was really good to see. And his encounter with Helga and Rowena was intriguing too (though I found it wierd that the lady in waiting was just as beautiful as the princess.) I predict that he'll eventually fall in love with one of them, but which one?

On to the next chapter! You'll be hearing from me again momentarily :)

Author's Response: I have plans for Godric, BIG plans. You'll just have to wait and see. I will look into adjusting and rewording that line, although you are right on in your assumptions. Thanks for the reviewing. You do deserve a spot in my A/n: in chapter 6.

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