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Review:The Last Marauder says:
Finally - I missed you in the time you were gone! Now I have two chapter (well only one now!) of Moonlight to read - YES!

I thought you captured the aftermath of Ted's departure really well, while at the same time highlighting the tension between Remus and Andromeda, I'd imagine her anamosity towards him would increase, because now she sees her daughter with her husband, while Andromeda no longer has her husband beside her - it must be tough living with that constant reminder.

I liked how you captured Remus's frustration at feeling 'useless', and I loved how you set up Potterwatch, of the twins saying they wanted to do something to get behind Harry. I LOVED this line: "But Fred, with this paralyzing weapon of fear, who among the common people will be truly brave enough to listen?" I liked the idea of fear being a weapon, and the contrast between Fred and George's bravery in speaking out, and the bravery of the people who will listen :)

I'm really eager to read the next chapter, and I just can't wait - must read on

Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you liked the bit about the fear too. this is after all a big step they're taking, a slap in the face to the powers at be, and association has its dangers, ofc.

and i will say that this is part of the story where i feel so sorry for andromeda.

thanks for the awesome review, as always! :D


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