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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Hey, I'm back!

Wow, the plot thickens! Salazar and Rowena married...I just can't tell yet if I think that relationship would work. I can see them clashing a lot, since both of them clearly have strong personalities. I'm looking forward to see how this unfolds!

I really like the way you write Salazar; between him and Rowena, he's definitely my favorite of the two. He seems just like I would imagine him: confident, maybe even prideful, and inspires fear in people. His squire's reaction to him was very telling about Salazar's effect on people, and it's clear that he gets that fearsome demeanor from his dad. Like I said, I really like your characterization in this chapter!

I'll be back shortly with a review on your next chapter. I'm enjoying this a lot so far!

Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing. I'm glad you like Salazar, that was my intention.

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