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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Back again! I would have been here sooner if I had known that you had updated so forgive me for being late on this but, here I am. :D
I was glad to know what had happened to Bill in this chapter, I sort of figured that it had something to do with the Order. I loved that little bit about Diggle though, and his impersonations--he should do one of Snape! Bwhahah, that would make me laugh so hard! But this isn't a comedy!
Anyway, I have nothing at all to complain about with your pacing or grammar or any of that boring stuff that holds us writers down. It was excellent as always and that ending! I thought Fleur was going to kill Bill for a minute or two, she was that angry with him but instead, it worked out for itself and their bond grew stronger! :D
I was so pleased and I'm also envious because...I want to snog Bill. Darn you Fleur! Hahah, anyway, I can't wait to see what happens with their relationship and the hurdles that they might go through later on. You've got me really enjoying this!
P.S.: My computer shall be fixed (Hopefully) by the end of this month. I decided that I have kept you all waiting too long and I shall update each of my stories by three chapters just to make it up to you all. So keep on the look out for them!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Wouldn't we all like the chance to snog Bill? Fleur is a very lucky girl! Thanks for another lovely review, I always look forward to seeing what you think! The next chapter has now been posted, and I'm still working away on the next parts!

I'm not actually too sure where the whole thing with Dedalus came from, I just sort of went with it, so I'm glad you enjoyed! The ending was rewritten a couple of times, and I wasn't sure if it fitted or not, so thanks for your comment!

I can't wait for your next updates, and hopefully will be able to read them soon!!


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