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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I was going to read this yesterday but decided to devote a much longer review today since I didn't have the time then. As always, I was glad to be back and I'm really enjoying the way you've continued to give more information on the Wizarding world. The slight changes here and there are reflected well with Pansy's POV and I agree that Harry sort of got off easy, being an Auror and all that. Not that I hate him but that was something I was nodding my head to, it sort of isn't fair but regardless, there it was. I was disappointed in Pansy's NEWTs! Bad her! Hahah, but I totally understand the sort of pressure she was under, but at least she took them. If the War hadn't have happened, I'm wondering if she would have ever bothered at all, I sort of enjoyed how you added in her flashbacks with Snape too. Poor him, reading her terrible essays...:D
That last little bit was a good surprise! I had never thought of her working as a reporter before but I think it suits her very well--I just hope she won't turn into a monster like Rita Skeeter. :p
But this also means that she might be around Mr. Bennett a bit more, and I'm curious to see how you develop things between them a bit, I can't wait to find out more about him. :D
Now, I shall leave you to type and as always, update immediately! I'll be looking forward to it!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thanks once again for reviewing! I always love to hear your thoughts on the chapters.

Once again I'm glad that you like the slight changes I've made to the Wizarding world. And, to be honest, I'd never really thought about Harry's placement in the Aurors as being unfair before but when I was writing it through Pansy's eyes it suddenly seemed very unfair indeed. It's interesting what perspectives writing through different characters will give you.

Yes, Pansy didn't do so well on her N.E.W.T.s, at least not by society's standards. However, she wasn't that great of a student to begin with, nor that intellectually talented... If the war hadn't happened she probably would have written them, since she still would have been in Hogwarts, but she probably wouldn't have put the effort she did into studying and her results would have been even worse. However, her marks aren't horrible... Just not brilliant.

I'm glad that you like the idea of her being a reporter. Her career isn't set in stone yet, though- you'll find out in the next chapter what path she decides to pursue. I can, however, promise you that she won't turn out like Rita Skeeter- it would damage her reputation too much, which is the one thing she's determined to repair.

Mr Bennett will continue to appear in the later chapters and you'll see more about how he'll fit into her life.

The next chapter should hopefully be up in a week! I'm glad that you're still enjoying the story.


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