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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hi there! Before I get to the good, and believe me there's quite a bit of it, I have a little bit of critique for you. I was confused several times throughout this chapter as characters seemed to jump from one place to another without much transition. You should probably either insert a page break or asterik (*) or have a transitioning sentence to the next part.

Other than that, however, this was a great chapter. You made it work well in the context of Hogwarts and I loved the witty banter. That always seems to be my favorite part of a story :P It makes sense that Cedric and Oliver would be friends, considering that they both love Quidditch, and I think the flirting sprinkled throughout this was great. Nice job!

-Naida

REVIEWED FOR THE HOUSE CUP 2012 COMPETITION

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