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Review:Kira says:
Totally just added this to my favorites. Wow, just wow. This one really hit home for me because I really don't get along with my older sister very well. Not that I wouldn't take care of her baby, but you get the point. What a brave choice to make the ending so bitter and tragic! I have to admit throughout the whole thing I was expecting them to hug and cry at the end, but this is just so much more powerful. I love how you dug so deeply into the emotions of both Lily and Petunia. Such strong themes of grief, frustration, and jealousy here! Brilliant, just brilliant. I loved this story and really made me think about both of their characters and what it really means to be a sister. Thank you.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!

I don't think there are a lot of people out there capable behaving the way Petunia did. It might just be me, but even if I hated my sister, I would never treat an innocent child that way.

In my head, that was always how it ended, though I considered the option of leaving it unresolved. They were never going to kiss and make up, it didn't work that way. What happened wasn't just something you could forgive and forget easily.

I think the emotions of this one shot are the most important part, and I'm glad you liked them. If Lily and Petunia's meeting was going to be anything, emotional would certainly be it.

I'm glad you liked my story!!


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