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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Hey! I'm so excited to see that you decided to update this! I was completely hooked by the first chapter, and this one definitely doesn't disappoint :)

I loved getting to see more of Rose in this chapter. She's very different from how I've normally seen her portrayed, and a lot of that seems to be because of her prophetic dreams. I can't imagine what a toll that must take on her, and the weight of it clearly shows in her behavior. And I love the idea of Rose being a Seer, because her mother's attitude toward Divination just makes it so ironic.

Your descriptive style is what makes this story really stand out for me. Rose's visions of the forest are horrifyingly detailed, and her everyday life is described very thoroughly as well. Great job with that!

I'll definitely continue to stalk this for updates! This is such a creative idea, and it's written so well. Keep up the great work!

--Maggie

Author's Response: Heya! Yeah I finally got my muse back for this- was high time I updated it! I'm so glad it doesn't! :) with the amount of time between the first chapter being posted and this one, I was definitely worried it'd fall flat.

Oh that's so good to read! I'm glad it shows, as that is something I hoped that bit of her trying to sleep and being unable to properly would do. :) should hopefully get to show even more of that in chapter 3 and beyond! Yeah that was mainly why I decided to have her be one =P Figure her father would think the subject is a joke, her mother hated it...so naturally their child should so have to deal with it as a huge part of her life.

Thank you!! I'm always a bit worried about going overboard description wise, so I'm glad that it makes it stand out instead!

Should have an update soon, I'm thinking next week depending on how RL goes =D eep, thank you!!

-Cait


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