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Review:Ashling586 says:
House cup 2012 task two:
I thought the tucking in scene was cute, though I wouldn't have minded if you had added in a bedtime story. I thought the letter to Harry and Ginny was right on and I could totally see her writing exactly that. I liked the way you described the Malfoy Manor, making it lighter and more homey was a good touch.
I did wonder though what happened to Hermione's personal belongings? You mention in the past chapter that she was already packed and ready, but from what I gathered from this chapter everything in her closet and rooms where new. So where did her belongings go? Are they being delivered later?
Overall very good job. I am enjoying this story very well.

Author's Response: I agree!

I always imagined that after the war, Malfoy Manor would've gone through a thorough renovation because of all the bad memories there. I don't think Draco would have wanted his family to always have a constant reminder of the past and have his children to grow up in an environment that holds bad memories.

Yah Hermione's personal belongings will come up later :D


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