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Review:purplewings721 says:
This story is absolutely hilarious. I love how Molly has this huge vandetta and grudge against her gran, and blames everything on her. She's so snarky and irresponsible - she fits 'Slytherin' perfectly. And the fact that she's not only a squib, but a Wotter as well. Poor girl, that's gotta be rough. Although, I'd love to know what her cousins' reactions would be once they found out.

I love this line:
Oi! We're not a nation, lady! What's wrong with 'classmates'? Honestly!

Brilliant!

Oh, and I love how Timothy wants to be called "Moth". I couldn't stop cracking up at that. And the bowler hat/slips of paper! Hahaha, I almost wished that they would've stuck with it.

I've noticed a few errors with the dialogue (mainly because I've just been made aware of it in my own story as well). For example:

“Right.” She said sharply. should be "Right," she said sharply. The only time a pronoun needs to be capitalized after dialogue, is when it's I or a name. The forums have some great topics about grammar and dialogue that have really helped me out. Just a little tip. :)

Anyway, I really love this story and how orignial it is. Please update soon!
-Camila :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Awh - thank you very much. Molly is bitter - there really is no other explanation! She has no - or very little - luck. You'll definitely learn about it - though Molly has a few tricks up her sleeve first. ;)

Ooh! I didn't know that (I'm learning every day :) )! I'll fix that after the next chapter update!

Thank you so much for leaving such a lovely review and I'm really glad you're enjoying Outcast.

Keira :)


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