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Review:Ashling586 says:
house cup 2012 task two:
I liked the scene with Hermione and Adrian. I thought it flowed well and was quite sweet. I have always said that young children can tell who is a great person and who is not, and the fact that Hermione is great with kids is a plus. I thought the reaction of Draco seeing Hermione was great. I wish I knew what Kingsley had told Draco in his office when they were alone. If you ever wanted to make this chapter longer, you could always add a split scene in draco's pov on what happened in the office.
Overall I am really enjoying this story and I am so glad that task two was a reviewing challenge because it helped me to find this story.

Author's Response: I like that suggestion, I never thought of a Draco POV...I'm glad that the scene with Adrian and Hermione sounded believable. I had a hard time writing it and wondering how Adrian would sound; then I just decide to base him off my four year old cousin :D

I'm really really glad you're enjoying the story and super glad that 'task two was a reviewing challenge' because it gave another dramione fan a chance to read Mission Malfoy :)

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