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Review:Keira7794 says:
I love your cheery message at the end - a slight contrast to the angst and drama of the chapter :P

Oh, James. :( It had to happen at such a bad time as well, you really feel for him and almost get angry at Lily for just being too distanced. I loved that you included Siuris beign upset - they were like a substitute family for him and most people ignore this. Great job on that! :)

"He would not cry in front of me, for he no longer trusted me." - okay, that line just sucks. (In a really good way). I ended up reading it with a 'pouty' lip. :P Your writing style is so blunt and one of the things I really love about this story is that you can actually see how your writing developed over the period it took to complete this. I love it when you can see that!

Anyway, onto the next chapter - 10/10 Keira :)

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