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Review:Erised says:
Again, this is just awesome. Although it was somewhat jumpy in its topic and writing style, it didn't detract from the story and reading a fic from Lavender's point of view is really refreshing to see.

The way you played her character was absolutely superb. You managed to give her a depth that's unseen in the book and gave her a real reason for being in Gryffindor. Her situation with her fertility was really heartbreaking, but knowing that she would pull through it gives the reader a light at the end of the tunnel.

Your writing style is excellent, and the description really added depth to the story as a whole. I also enjoyed the structure of the story, as we see Lavender's change from a silly little girl to a strong young woman. It was really great to see.

Fabulous stuff!

Author's Response: Eee thank you! This one-shot was a huge let's-try-everything, and I had very few plans about it, but I ended up loving Lavender. It's become sort of this theme in my writing - I love writing about different ways people can be strong, especially the lesser-liked characters, and flesh out the bravery between the cracks.



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