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Review:Debra20 says:
Hey hunny!

Ok - I will admit that I wasn't expecting this. I imagined that it would be an angsty one shot but the level of emotions it sent cannot be expressed in words properly. You conveyed such a believable image of George, or better said, what has become of George that this is and will surely always be one of the stories canon to me. You do have a great way with words. I was almost sure when I read your First Task Entry but now I have no doubts.

I was surprised that the one that entered the shop was Hannah. But after reading their short interaction and the ending phrases, I could never imagine someone better. There is something that unites you to others who have lost the same amount as you. A bond that can only be shard by those that have been through similar experiences.

Truly incredible story!

Author's Response: Hiya!

Wow, thank you so much! That is so sweet of you to say. I really wanted to get into George's head here and I wrote how I felt he would be affected.

I used Hannah because I imagine her to have a very soothing, mumsy nature about her to counteract the storm that he's got going on - and yes, she's lost her mother, so similar experiences.

Thank you so much for your lovely compliments and thank you for your wonderful review! *hugs*

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