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Review:Athene Goodstrength says:
This was adorable! And you get extra brownie points for quoting Obi Wan.

What a lovely idea for a story- of course, it makes sense that the Potters and Longbottoms would find out at about the same time! And they would have known each other well, too. What a sweet idea, a bit of canon that I'd not really thought about.

You characterization was lovely (I loved James falling asleep with his glasses on!), and I enjoyed the two relationships we saw here. I particularly loved Frank saying 'We're going to be a family!' and James' exclamation of 'Dumbledore's beard!'.

All in all, a really sweet, lovely little one-shot. Glad I came across it!

~House Cup 2012 Task Two~

Author's Response: Yay for brownie points! (and Obi-Wan!)

Thank you! Yeah, because Neville and Harry were born in the same month so it only makes sense that they would find out about it at the same time :)

I'm glad you liked the characterisation (attractive guys falling asleep with glasses on is so cute!) Haha, thank you!!

Jasmine


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