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Review:Deltaris says:
I was in tears at your first paragraph. I love Neville so much, and have read plenty of stories with him and his parents, but none of their actual death. This is just astoundingly touching.

I also really love Hannah in this. She's so supportive and reads Neville in a way that only she can, and you really show their love for one another.

The image of Neville on the floor is so powerful. I can't count the times I've ended up in that position out of grief, and to see Neville, someone who I view as incredibly strong, there is a bit overwhelming.

I completely lost it at that letter. You really did amazingly with this piece.


Author's Response: Don't cry! It wasn't intended to make people cry!

I love Neville too and I think sometimes he gets a raw deal in fanfiction! I think Hannah is genuinely amazing at being supportive and from Canon I can simply imagine her being like that which is great.

Neville is just so heartbroken!

I'm glad you liked it!

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