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Review:Ashling586 says:
House cup 2012 task two:
I liked how you explained the issue with Draco having a son. It sort of left me feeling sorry for him, losing his wife and having to raise a son all by himself. I am still a little bit confused as to why the ministry is helping him find a wife and I am hoping that I will find out more as I read the upcoming chapters.
There was one grammar issue that i wanted to point out.
"Would do you think Hermione?" I am not sure what this is suppose to be. I assume that it should be what do you think but then all hermione does is nod in response so I am not sure. You might want to go back and clarify that part.
This was a short chapter but very informative and over all well written. Good job.

Author's Response: heyy!
Thanks for pointing that out I'll go and and edit it. I'm glad you liked this chapter :D
Rilla


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