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Review:LadyL8 says:
Hi there.

OMG. I love that ending! I was so sure I had figured out the whole story, then that ending came and I realized I had it all wrong.

Anyway, this story captivated me. I love how you start with that ... I don't know what to call it... but it looked like something you could see in a news paper, someone looking for a lost person, a missing person. And I just immediately thought that this had something to do with the war. This was a girl that something happened to during the war. But I was of course wrong!

I love your way of writing; the fact that you have a lot of description, emotion are in italics, and how you end it the way you do. I wasn't sure how I would like seeing James with someone else that Lily, but it worked. And I love how you point out that it's the war that makes them feel the way they do for each other, cause I can definitely imagine that.

And my favorite part was that ending. It was surprising to say the least. I didn't see that coming. But I did love it. I didn't think the girl was Marlene, but it does make sense as they were most likely around the same age. So yeah, I enjoyed it. Good job :D

Yours Sincerely
LadyL8

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