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Review:Debra20 says:
Hello!

I loved how this story's pores breathed love. Love for the baby and love between Lucius and Narcissa. Even though it was a bit confusing at the beginning, not knowing who or whom they were talking about, I caught up before the middle of the story. I'm happy that in only 500 words you managed to transpire the close relationship that I have always believed characterised the Malfoy family. A bond that helped them pass difficult moments and remain united. A tie that would never sewer no matter what. As proved in Deathly Hallows, family comes first to them. Not their cause, not their obligations nor their fear for Voldemort. Just love :)

A very cute short piece. A pleasure to read. You handle Lucius/nArcissa pretty well. Maybe you will consider writing longer fics about them :)

Author's Response: You weren't suppose to catch up in the middle! I wanted you confused until the very end ;). I actually even threw in some things relating directly to Harry with the hopes of confusing the reader ;).

Thank you so much for this wonderful review! I just might eventually! Astoria and Draco are also very fun to write about for me!

Thank you again, darling!

Jami


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