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Review:Ashling586 says:
house cup 2012 task two:
Why did Draco send her the rose? I am assuming he was the one since you mentioned him having a rose in the first chapter. Why is Draco into Hermione? Who was Pansy all over when he came back to the table? Did you mean to say that she draped herself all over him when he came back? Where did Ginny come from? One second Hermione is thinking that she needed to talk to Ginny and the next line she is suddenly there.
You have a really good idea going on here. I just think that it could use a bit more detail. Maybe you could add in the dream to give the chapter a bit of pop. Details like where Hermione meet up with Ginny, What kind of potion did they work on in class, and other little things to draw the reader in.
I would really like to see where this story ends up.

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