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Review:Deltaris says:
I really like how you've chose to show a literal form of Cho 'facing her dragons' with Cedric's death and everything that came after. It's not only fighting the dragon that will help Cho, it's actually facing her own feelings, and both tie together wonderfully here.

'and didn't have an oven which needed cleaning either.' - that made me laugh.

Cho's memories of Cedric's death are extremely emotional. You really handled her dealing with death wonderfully and tastefully in this.

You did a great job showing the game of cat and mouse between Cho and the dragon as well. It could've very well come out awkwardly and unneeded, but your descriptions and pace were fantastic.

Great job!
Del<3

Author's Response: Hey there! Yeah, it sort of stemmed from the idea of Cho seeking closure after the tournament and somehow this came out O.o She's sort of facing everything: herself, the dragon, Cedric's memory, her grief... everything. Kinda intense, lol.

Yes! Random comedy is always good! Unintentional - but good! :D

Thank you! I'm so glad you thought that. Death and grief are obviously very emotive subjects and I tried not to be over-the-top or too comical with it or to make Cho too obsessive (by the time this is set, Cedric's been dead for four or five years, after all). And yeah, the whole cat-and-mouse thing... well, a dragon is a predator, right? It was a predator/prey thing, really :P

Thank you so much for this wonderful review!

Aph xx

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