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Review:luvinpadfoot says:
Aw, it was such a sweet ending to such a sad story! I was almost in tears at the beginning when Luna found the dead, but Draco's entrance made me smile. It was great!

The only note I have would be to slow it down a bit. There could be more description, more of her pain visible to us, and then more of her reunion with Draco. Not to sound greedy, but it's so good I want more! =)

I never really thought of Fred and Luna knowing each other, but it doesn't sound too odd. They would definitely be the kind of people who would get along, especially in the way that you've written Luna.

And aw! Draco came back for her! I just love that bit of the story so much. It was truly wonderful! =)

Author's Response: Thank you! Aw thanks, yeah I had to sort of rush this since I didn't have much time, but maybe you could read my other stories for more? Thank you so much, you made my day! :D

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