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Review:Debra20 says:

First off: if this is an unedited story, how do your edited ones look like? It's amazing! I can't begin to tell you how much I loved and enjoyed it. I don't know if it's just a coincidence but today I pondered writing a story about the Black sisters because I was sure no one ventured to do it. And here came your story! I am sure to review every single chapter.

I simply adore how you portrayed their relationship. So strong. It seems almost unbreakable. It makes it an even more bitter-sweet story knowing how their relationship will end up. Brothers and sisters should never fight. Should never turn their backs on each other. Should never kill each other if given the opportunity despite whatever conflict they may have.

The characters are very much in character (well except Andromeda who feels a bit like an OC since we don't know that much about her). Bella is as bossy as we see her as an adult, always praising their name and status. Cissy is simply adorable. A very lovely story this is!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. There does seem to be a lack of stories about the Black sisters, so here's my attempt at trying to figure them out.

It does make it even more bittersweet knowing that eventually, they'll fall out- I completely agree with the idea that siblings shouldn't fight or turn their backs on each other. I think the relationships between siblings is something unique and special... hopefully that'll come through in the story. :)

Hopefully more of Andromeda's character will be seen soon! :) Thank you for such a nice review!

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