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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
I'm really mad at you right now.

How could you make me cry?

"Fleur, you would never have what it takes to do what would be needed if, or when, we fall under attack. You are too naive, you couldn't-" he was abruptly cut off by the furry he saw building behind her eyes. What was it they said about never angering a Veela?

^ I don't actually like this pairing to be honest. I never read them. Fleur annoys me. I'm horrible, I know but I always give her a chance if I come across a story with her in it. There's just something about her that irks me. But anyway, I didn't expect her to show him a memory of what she did. I really liked that because Fleur is strong and so many people put her off as this vain and weak woman. She's not that. She wouldn't have been picked for the TWT if she was weak, right? Give her some credit!


Before she could reacted, a small voice echoed from the dark.

^ 'reacted' should be 'react'

she spit directly into his lifeless face.

^ That gave me chills.

Hermione was the only thing holding me up. I would have just fallen and waited for one of his men to kill me. She kept saying that it would be okay, even though I knew she didn't believe it. After everyone we lost, I just knew I couldn't

^ And this is when the tears started to fall. I have to be honest. It was too emotional for me. When George started to speak about Fred I had to skip that entire paragraph. I just couldn't handle it right now. It was too much.

There was so much truth, so much emotion coming from them all and it was so overwhelming. I know they were all trying to let everything go and try to heal themselves and I think that's what made this story even more powerful.

To be blessed with a child in the end. One that would live in a world where there would be no dark forces to seriously fear was just beautiful. I'm so happy that in the end Bill/Fleur and everyone else was able to find happiness.

Author's Response: Aw I don't know what to do with you! You are too sweet, I'm sorry I made you sad but secretly happy about it. Even though I guess it isn't a secret because I just told you.

I love writing Fleur. Something about what a mess of contradictions she is just sparks my little brain.

I'll turn you onto her eventually ;).

Thank you so much for this wonderfully amazing review ♥ and for pointing out those typos!

I anon you! hahaha I'm never going to be able to stop!

I need AA for Anon!


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