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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This is just... I don't really know.

I liked the way it started off in a very light atmosphere with Lily running off from Tuney and then Tuney with her curiosity trying to keep up with Lily. I liked how it was almost just a childish game of tag, with the taunting and no seriousness.

Then when Lily tells her about the letter, its very easy to see the rejection Petunia feels with her sister going off to Hogwarts with Severus and its sort of a little sad because the chances are Lily would have been her best friend too.

The ending is just sad. It shows that losing Lily did affect petunia and as much as she moaned about her and cursed her, she still loved her and wished they'd been closer.

I liked it

Author's Response: The beginning of this was written quite a while before the rest. It just came to me, but it lacked plot. When I did come up with the plot, I really wanted a contrast with the beginning and the end, just to show how easily things can go wrong.
Lily and Petunia's relationship is so complex and confusing and I love writing it from different perspectives just to try and discover exactly how it was!
Thank you for the review!!

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