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Review:Athene Goodstrength says:
This was stunning. Your characterizations are just so perfect, I felt as if I was reading canon here. Your language, use of imagery, the the and flow... everything was just fantastic.

I love the idea of Sirius and James working over Christmas, being adventurous and somewhat enjoying the danger - but James missing his family nonetheless. The bits where they're making fun of Dumbledore made me laugh!

I loved the shift to Lily, the contrast in environments was lovely. The manic, fast-moving and cold forest to the gentle quiet of an English garden in the snow. Just beautiful.

I loved the touch of the patronus changing when James is away.

This whole story was beautifully written, I felt transported by it. Adding to favourites. 10/10!

~House Cup 2012 Task Two~

Author's Response: This was my first one-shot ever and has a special place in my heart. I'm so glad you liked it. ^_^

I wasn't sure if anyone would get my strange sense of humour, so i'm glad you found that entertaining. I wanted to show that even though they were out fighting in the war, they were still boys, only just out of Hogwarts and meant to be enjoying life.

The Lily scene wasn't planned but it didn't seem complete without it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I fiddled with it a bit, but i'm please with how it turned out.

Thanks so much for the review! It means a lot!

- Adele :)

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