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Review:Deltaris says:
I like how this centers around Severus instead of Salazar. He's such a deep, complicated character, and this was great.

'Lily, Potter and their baby' - the way he thinks of the Potters in his own mind is great. It really shows the different ways in which he views the three of them. Lily will always be his first love, Potter bullied him throughout school and 'stole' his love from him, and Harry is the child he wished he had with Lily. Even in just doing this, you really show his feelings towards them.

I love the little touches you added about Severus's and Lily's childhood. It was really sweet and touching :)

I did see a few mistakes here and there, but where as this was done for task one and in so little time, it's to be expected. Overall, I think this was really good.

Del<3

Author's Response: Thank you! This is an amazing review, totally loving it :)
ML


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