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Review:Debra20 says:
Hey there!

I'm so glad to be reviewing your first Snape/Lily story. I have been reading any Snily story on the Archives that I could find. And I must say I dearly enjoyed yours. I like how Snape's emotions flow here. I'm guessing it's the moment where he finds her body between the wrecks of their home in Godric's Hollow. He feels so broken. His trail of thoughts are flowing in an almost feverish manner. Exploring Snape's thoughts is a dangerous endeavour because you never know where you might end up. I'm glad to see that your portrayal of his inner turmoil are close to character :)

"he still hoped for all those years that he would get it, thinking that there was still plenty of time to get it" - this is one of my favourite lines. It shows just how unfair life can be. How you can really never trust time because life can play games on you and turn everything you knew up side down. It's a very sad phrase because one can feel his deep regret. I think more than being sad because of her death, he regrets having acted like he acted and not having the chance for her to forgive him.

A very emotional piece!

Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad that you enjoyed this short one shot! Yes this one shot does take place when he finds her body and realizes that he can no longer hope for her forgiveness. I love it when readers quote lines from the story, it really makes me see what really works for the readers and what really makes them think! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this and thank you for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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