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Review:eternalangel says:
Wow. This chapter hit me with a emotional punch when I realized that 9/11 was involved in this. Normally a topic such as this is a hard topic to write about because it is such an emotionally charged topic, but I think you managed to handle it very well. I liked the multiple points of view that was used in this, especially Behrooz. I connected with his innocent view of the world the most and I think you did an excellent job showing his family and his point of view well. I especially liked the mother's saying on sunsets.

What I also liked was how you wove in the magical world into the muggle world. I have often wondered when tragedies like this happens in the Muggle world in this universe how the magical world reacts to them. I am intrigued to see what happens next.

I have to say that I was moved by this start of a story. Good job.


Author's Response: Thankyou so much for reading, i'm glad you liked the chapter :)

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