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Review:Debra20 says:
Heya!

It's great to read about the minor characters of Hogwarts. I always get a thrill when I find more stories like these because to me reading about the less mentioned characters completes the world of Harry Potter. Expands it beyond what we know from Harry's point of view.

I must admit it. Romance is not my favourite genre to read but this one shot bubbled the fluff inside me. I have never experienced something like this (being asked to dance) so your story helped me imagine how it would be like. I loved the light hearted style of it and how you managed to introduce us to a new character, almost an OC. From what I've read she seemed pretty real. A girl with normal thoughts and desires for her age. A girl who wishes to feel part of a group, a community. I take it that she didn't get along too well with her fellow Slytherins.

There are some minor things I could suggest, if you'd like. "sloppy note to home" - to me, I think "a sloppy note home" would sound much better and would keep the flow of the story intact. Also, "Theo and I were able to get inside the doors" - I think "get through the doors' would suit that phrase much better.

A lovely read it has been. Kudos for having the courage to write from a Slytherin's point of view and pull it off nicely!

REVIEWED FOR THE HOUSE CUP 2012 COMPETITION

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! I will look into those suggestions and possibly give this oneshot an edit sometime soon! I'm glad that while you dont normally read romance this stick gave you fluffy feelings! Tracey and Theo are one of my favorite pairings and I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading about them! Thank you again!

~Slytherinchica08~


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