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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Gosh. That was a bit intense! For a James/Lily shipper, like me, I found this a bit sad. I feel like Severus deserved everything that happened to him. Which is quite ironic, since I am a Slytherin.

Anywho, I thought you did a great job with the overall story. Though, I think you could still add a little more intensity by 'delving' deeper into Snape's feelings. Just a thought! Like I said, you have a great story here! :D

Slytherin For The House Cup 2012,
Izzy xx

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm thinking of doing a re-write to see if I can explore his feelings a bit more, so watch this space!
I'm glad you liked it, Thanks for reading! :)

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