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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Hi! I stumbled upon this story and thought I'd stop by and review. (The House Cup has got me on a reviewing spree :P)

I haven't actually read many stories centered around Draco or Ginny, and I've never read one that focused on them as a couple. But I enjoyed reading this one-shot, and now maybe I'll explore the pairing a little more :)

You describe Ginny's emotions so well in the beginning. Heartbreak is an issue that so many people can relate to, and I think you do a great job of making that devastating feeling real to the reader. It definitely resonated with me. Great job with that!

When Draco comes in, the details started to get a little fuzzy for me. I think reading the prequel would help a lot, because I had a lot of questions. Why was the ball held in the first place? Who is the Bradley kid Ginny was talking about? Did Hermione experience a similar heartbreak in that first story? I'm not criticizing your writing here...I just mean that I definitely should have read the prequel before reading this. It would have filled in a lot of blanks :)

My favorite part was at the very end, when Pansy sees Draco and Ginny kissing. It brings the whole thing full circle: one person's happiness brings about heartbreak for another. And now I totally get why this is called Cycle of Flight! Haha I literally just noticed the significance there..awesome job!

I enjoyed this! Keep up the good work :)

--Maggie (House Cup 2012)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I alot of those things were explained in the sequel, but it seems like you still got the gist of what was happening. Its great that Ginny's heatbreak got across.

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