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Review:StEpH_M says:
Oh I really like this, I didn't realise till the end that it was set in seventh year and during the second wizarding war but I do like that she was reflecting her past in a time where survival wasn't always a certainty and you would have been lucky to get out alive. It's one of those weird things, people looking back at the past in moments of crisis, and you did it really well.

I like how you made it out that she hated Harry, and I think at times she probably did, more so after fifth year but she would have hated him for surviving when Cedric could not and getting glory where for a over a year Cedric wasn't named a hero but an accident.

I also like her defence against Cedric being called a spare, it's nice to see that she defended him in her mind, that she saw him as much more then just someone who was an obstacle in a greater plan, that he was important. I also like the fact that Cho joined the DA for Cedric, became a fighter for him and fought in his name, it's nice to see and very different. :)

Overall I really liked it and it's a great story :) Great Job :)

- Steph

Author's Response: Hi Steph :D.
Cho is meant to be angry, confused and upset here. She's in the middle of a war, she's lost the boy she loved, she doesn't know how to deal with it and so she blames Harry. I think, if I were in her position, that I would as well. She's just human; it's so much easier to rant and hate others than to hate yourself.

I wasn't sure wha time period I was going to set it in until the end to be honest! I wrote this in about two hours and it was all a bit higgledy piggledy.

Thanks for reviewing!! :)


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