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Review:Athene Goodstrength says:
This was lovely! Little Neville was adorable. I actually forgot that I was reading a task entry as you included the prompts so subtly and naturally - really well done with that!

Auntie Enid is so nice (with her story-telling powers she made me think of Enid Blyton!)... I wish Neville lived with her!

I liked the foreshadowing at the end, the aunt's faith that one day Neville will show himself to be brave. I also loved the 'Forgetfulness Dragon'! I wonder if Neville's had one following him around all his life. It's like something Luna would talk about!

This was lovely, and a great HC entry - you've done Gryffindor proud!

~House Cup Task Two~

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!!
I'm so glad I got them in so well! I was really worried about it!
I always felt like there was more to Neville's bravery coming out that we all thought, so I kind of imagined him thinking back on this moment and it giving him strength.

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