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Review:Pixileanin says:
I love that you've pulled a squib into this story. It seems like the perfect opportunity to use someone who has knowledge of the Wizarding World, but who are also more apt to live among the Muggles. You did a great job making me feel the excitement with him when he did his job. He definitely has the right occupation.

I feel a connection coming on. Having Anastasia growing up in an orphanage and then attending Durmstrang, the home she never had before, will definitely make her sympathetic to others in her same situation. I will pretend to know where this is going, and then I will be delightfully surprised when you prove me wrong.

As a musician, I would have written "dramatic crescendo of the piece" as "dramatic climax of the piece", but we all know what you meant, so it doesn't matter much. I liked her conflicted feelings about her mission, and what is compelling her to move forward with it.

And I really enjoyed seeing you bring in some familiar faces from your other fic! You have a great setup and a clear introduction to the key players and I will have to return to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Hey again!

So I needed some linakage to the Muggle world to allow the information to leak, and that seemed to be the perfect way.

You are correct in observing that Anastasia's background is meant to mirror that of a certain other character, but that's all I'll say about that for now of course.

And I just had to bring Duncan back, but there's a lot more to his story that remains to be told.

Thanks a lot for the review!


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