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Review:Aphoride says:
Okay, okay, I couldn't resist! I've read this before - twice before, I think - but I had to come back and review this chapter! It was too good an opportunity to pass up! Plus, I love this story to pieces so it was on my list to do! :D

Bill is amazing. I'm just... gah, he's wonderful. He's so real and full of conflicting traits. It's literally like you've taken a real person and somehow pushed them into ink or something and created them on the screeen in this fic. It's incredible. I love how sometimes he's a bit almost angry with Fleur, about her conversation with Mhairi, and then when she says she forgot to take a note he's almost consoling her. It's such good characterisation... ah, he's just wonderful :)

I love Fleur almost as much as him, too! She's so manipulative and clever and all perfect hair, perfect smile... it's so impressive and so her! I just love it. Also, kudos on writing the accent in - I did it for a one-shot but I could never have done it for a story this long. It would have driven me mad! :P

Ooh, they're going on a date! I'm so excited! I can't wait to see where this goes - how their date goes, how their investigation continues and... everything. This is such a good story, I'm so in love with it... :)

Also, one last thing: 'pwetty French girlie'. Oh Charlie, oh Charlie... he's so wonderful and I haven't even met him yet ;)

Aph xx

House Cup 2012! :D

Author's Response: Ahha thank you Laura!! I do love reading your reviews on each of my chapters, you're so encouraging and lovely :3

I LOVE BILL SO MUCH, and I am so glad you like him too! I do so want to keep him in-canon and realistic, but keep him within my personal fanon, which often leads me astray with inconsistent characterisations :/

I LOVE writing Fleur, too! She's such a tricky character since I want readers to like her, but to keep her as her own person with real problems. Hee RELATIONSHIP PROGRESSION :D

Haha I'm very glad it's keeping your interest for the date! I am trying to keep this away from the twee end of the spectrum, so I do hope it's not too contrived-sounding :P But YAY INVESTIGATION, more to be revealed soon ;)

Charlie is fab, I can't wait for you to meet him too - you're his biggest fan and we've not come across him yet! :D

TGK xx

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