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Review:Deltaris says:
Wow. How you worked in the properties of Neville's wand is fantastic. Good at defensive spells. Oh, how I wish he didn't have to find out just how good it was in the way that he, and so many others, did. In that one little line, you really captured just how much impact the war has had on Neville, and his peers.

'It was a pity he didn't trust the rest of us.' - this line. Oh my gosh.

I am speechless. Parvati? I'm honestly tearing up right now. How you described her falling is so simple, and yet so powerful. Everything is rushed in Neville's mind, as I'd imagine everyone's would be at this point in the battle, and you really capture that.

Wow. You did fantastically with the prompts given and just the manner in which you wrote this. Neville is amazing here, and you show us a completely other side of him. Great job.

Del<3
Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Hello!

Oh, thank you very much for reading and reviewing my one-shot! I really wanted Neville to appear detached from the battle going around him - at the end of the day, they are still students and it is his classmates who were dying.

Your review really made my day and I'm so sorry for the late reply! Thank you again, Keira :)


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